Mountains and Skyscrapers 04
| "Mountains and Skyscrapers 04" | |
|---|---|
 Art by October Flixard | |
| Author | Coldstone |
| Series | Mountains and Skyscrapers |
| Originally Uploaded at | Furaffinity |
| Story Length | 9k words |
| Upload Date | August 7, 2015 |
| Preceded by | "Mountains and Skyscrapers 03" |
| Followed by | "Mountains and Skyscrapers 05" |
Chapter 4 comes with the first direct bit of dirty material. We shall see how others take to that. It's near the end, so there is still other stuff to read along with some suggestive stuff.
As I was proofing this (and a few other things), some chatter about third person limited and third person 'omniscient' came up. I like to think I did a small mix of both of those things, but as it got discussed, I realized I could potentially put more into these chapters if I did limited, and figured out a clean way to shift from Character to character...
Well, food for thought for later!
A thank you and appreciation to octoberflixard. It was from reading his work and Dark Violet's that I got so much brain burn in my head to start writing this. he deserves credit,and loves. Dark Violet deserves them too, mind you!
In the meantime... Cafe Plaisir is maintained by DarkViolet Café Plaisir © palibakufun Pokemon © Nintendo/Game Freak
